They question it, sure, but it doesn't seem natural how they do it. I can understand they'd guess he's from Peach Creek because earlier on, Double D said to Eddy that Billy and Ed were animated differently, so Lazlo must have known that too, but how was he able to guess it was Kevin? Did he even meet him before? I would assume he did but it's also never explained.Īlso, it seems kinda weird that the Agents appear so suddenly and that Lazlo and Clam accept it as is. How were Lazlo and Clam able to know that? It's never stated that they met that person in the past, he just tells them to disappear. Wrote:My nephew was the first to get the disease, how do you think I feel?Īnd then Lazlo and Clam somehow guess who's his nephew which oddly enough is Kevin (with last name included). The SWAT team is there to clean up the mess and help, but when one is interrogated he says this: We head to Camp Kidney afterwards where apparently everyone in the camp has also been quarantined.
(At least in ways I think the general audience would percieve it) I know that in a later chapter you established that this is intended as a movie because the general audience sees it as such with the characters all interacting with each other fighting an evil, but if it's intended as a movie, it should have a moderated pacing and have a few things explained properly. The most I get is that their animation styles are very different so to be related would be really awkward and beg the question how.Īnd another thing I noticed when reading the first few chapters is that the pacing is fast. I start to notice that Billy and Ed are related, in a way, but it is never explained in what way. Out of sheer coincidence, Billy appears, right out of a car no less, which begs the question how did Mandy get there. So, the first thing that happens is, the Eds are aware that there is some sort of quarantine in the Cul-de-Sac and then they go and get some jawbreakers. WARNING: This will be long, and at times will think I'm being a whiny idiot, but this is all done in good fun and I hope I don't offend anybody.
If you feel it was an unfair review, I understand. One last thing, I know I'm not a good critic and I'm not particularly interested in participating in that field, but I felt like I needed to give you guys something. work-MovieĪlso, since later on you will find me raising my tone to a point where I may seem like I'm being insulting, I've tried emulating the Nostalgia Critic, because I like his reactions. It's gonna sound mean since I'm tackling an older work and Colton's writing has most definitely improved since then but I'm gonna give it a go anyways because I like this fic.Īnd some of it is going to be nitpicking because I know no better. I'm probably not gonna do this right seeing that I'm not really the best person to review, but since there is nothing new going on in my life I had to do it.
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